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Take the Money and Run

Breeze 
blowing
curtains fly
water-scented
air.

Trail
man-made
escape route
never get caught...
boat.



For "Turn On The Lanterne" contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud.

By: George Aul

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Elizabeth Wesley

December 25, 2011 at 7:25 PM

A boat with a fast engine! I like the word play George, a great story with so few words; no wonder it was a winner!

Prentiss Davis

September 20, 2011 at 2:54 PM

hm.. i liked.

Sara Kendrick

September 10, 2011 at 4:14 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

September 9, 2011 at 8:38 AM

Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!--Lori

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 8, 2011 at 5:18 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,george

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 8, 2011 at 4:14 PM

Congrats George on another fabulous win with this awesome Lanterne poetry my friend.. clever one...luv..

Kash Poet

September 8, 2011 at 2:11 PM

Very nice approach here George.Congrats on your win!

Doris Culverhouse

September 8, 2011 at 12:24 PM

all of these are so good!! can't pick a favorite!

Bob Quigley

September 8, 2011 at 10:59 AM

Congratulations George. Amazing what different people see in a window.

Nette Onclaud

September 8, 2011 at 8:53 AM

really interesting, george! congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 8, 2011 at 8:18 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest George. Love, Carol

David Williams

September 8, 2011 at 5:02 AM

George, congrats on your win..David

Andrea Dietrich

September 8, 2011 at 12:43 AM

An interesting take on that picture, George. I did not even know this, but Kash told me it was the window of a TRAIN. Did you see it that way?

Sara Kendrick

September 7, 2011 at 5:59 PM

Very descriptive of the picture..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Nette's contest..Thanks for the congratulations..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 7, 2011 at 8:45 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest George. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

September 6, 2011 at 6:13 PM

Ah, I like your interpretation of the photo very much, George, especially the thought of the dustry trail being an escape route. Everyone in a flood zone should have a canoe or rowboat. Clever and inventive! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Caryl Ramsdale

September 6, 2011 at 4:09 PM

An original approach...Good job my friend and good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges. CR

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