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Take the Money and Run

Breeze blowing curtains fly water-scented air. Trail man-made escape route never get caught... boat. For "Turn On The Lanterne" contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. By: George Aul

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/25/2011 7:25:00 PM

A boat with a fast engine! I like the word play George, a great story with so few words; no wonder it was a winner!

Prentiss Davis

Date: 9/20/2011 2:54:00 PM

hm.. i liked.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2011 4:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/9/2011 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!--Lori

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2011 5:18:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,george

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2011 4:14:00 PM

Congrats George on another fabulous win with this awesome Lanterne poetry my friend.. clever one...luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 9/8/2011 2:11:00 PM

Very nice approach here George.Congrats on your win!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/8/2011 12:24:00 PM

all of these are so good!! can't pick a favorite!

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/8/2011 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations George. Amazing what different people see in a window.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/8/2011 8:53:00 AM

really interesting, george! congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2011 8:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest George. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/8/2011 5:02:00 AM

George, congrats on your win..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 12:43:00 AM

An interesting take on that picture, George. I did not even know this, but Kash told me it was the window of a TRAIN. Did you see it that way?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2011 5:59:00 PM

Very descriptive of the picture..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Nette's contest..Thanks for the congratulations..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2011 8:45:00 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest George. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/6/2011 6:13:00 PM

Ah, I like your interpretation of the photo very much, George, especially the thought of the dustry trail being an escape route. Everyone in a flood zone should have a canoe or rowboat. Clever and inventive! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/6/2011 4:09:00 PM

An original approach...Good job my friend and good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges. CR