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Take My Hand We Are To Dance In the Stars

take my hand we are to dance in the stars it is a whirlwind in its arms as we glide thru they will dance in a tiara of suns adorning you now lift your hand, turn in a balance as we glide thru nebulas the newly forming stars mix in your hair as rubies capturing that red seductive glow the essence you are i so adore drawn to the center a black hole becomes weak interacting massive particles to the gravity in your eyes i am held in your arms as such as we escape the event horizon we are now free to continue in eternity this is not a dream it is the next phase waiting when we escape this mortal coil there are a trillion galaxies and upon your dance ticket i am the only name wise men say only fools dream but if you look at Raphael's School of Athens, there are only men i prefer the dreams i have in your arms OKC 9/22

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Date: 9/18/2022 1:17:00 PM
The imagery throughout this poem is simply dazzling! The reader just gets caught up in it all and is swept away... Lovely work Timothy!
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Date: 9/11/2022 11:05:00 AM
So romantic. I do love a good dreamy dance among the stars!!
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Date: 9/10/2022 4:36:00 AM
Beautifully written Timothy. Astrophysics, Elvis and escaping life's troubles in a poem worthy of a scene from a classic Hollywood musical. Cheers - Gary
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Timothy Ray
Date: 9/11/2022 9:37:00 AM
thank you Gary....this poem was a monumental escape from recent research....it was more of a dance with God than a woman and a note that man in all of his wonderous ponderings fails in the end...Marx proposes a paradise of slavery while God Graces us with an eternity of joy....didn't see that coming did ya

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