Kay Roberts Poet Rhyme

Take My Hand

Take my hand come dance with me, just for a little while.
Take my hand come dance with me, I love to watch you smile.
Take my hand come dance with me, under the stars above.
Take my hand come dance with me, I will give you All my Love.
Take my hand come walk with me, just for a little while.
Take my hand come walk with me, I’ll be with you every mile.
Take my hand come walk with me, there’s so much more to learn.
Take my hand come walk with me, your love I want to earn.
Take my hand come share with me, a lifetime together.
Take my hand come share with me, my love for you forever.
Take my hand come share with me, memories to be made.
Take my hand come share with me, your fear when you’re afraid.
Take my hand come be with me, please say that you will.
Take my hand come be with me, of you I never have my fill.
Take my hand come be with me, you’re the one I want to know.
Take my hand come be with me, please don’t ever let go.

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Tony Devers October 11, 2016 at 1:59 AM Heartwarming stuff. For what's it's worth, I do like the repetition, it gives the poem an insistent rhythm like a drumbeat - or a heartbeat. Kay Roberts October 11, 2016 at 11:05 AM Oh Tony, thank you. That's how I feel.... Just like a heartbeat.

Paloma P October 6, 2016 at 9:15 AM Truthfully, I'm not crazy about the repetition, it gets a bit monotonous, but the sentiment shines through and that's what is important to me in poetry. Kay Roberts October 6, 2016 at 5:43 PM Thank you for your honesty. I understand it's not to everyone's taste, the world would be a very boring place if we all liked the same thing. There are so many different genres of poetry, with so many different sentiments...... Like you said, it's all about the sentiment.

Xavier Johnson October 5, 2016 at 4:18 PM Very deep into feeling Kay. I love it! Kay Roberts October 6, 2016 at 5:29 PM Thank you Xavier.

Daniel Turner October 5, 2016 at 9:00 AM Very romantic, Kay. True love is hard to find. Kay Roberts October 5, 2016 at 4:16 PM Thank you Daniel and yes it is. Those who find it are the lucky ones :-)