Take My Hand

Hey baby here I stand once again before you at your door.
Please just hear me out and don't close it, for my heart isn't mine anymore.
You see now I understand your the sanctuary for this heart once made of stone.
I guess at first I didn't see it clearly, my heart is yours and not my own.
Still I see the pain i've caused you, I see the tears that linger from the past.
My head was so far in the clouds I couldn't see nor could I grasp.
Let's have everything out right here, no forbidden words amongst us anymore.
I've exposed all that I am now, so just don't close the door.

Lets be rid of all the pain, and walk out of the rain.
Tell me what else can I say, there's one kiss left to be made.
All this love inside it just won't fade, and it's with me everyday.
Your the one one who makes me who I am, so baby just take my hand.

So tell me were you a little bit worried with me knocking on your door tonight.
I can see your a little bit nervous so let me make all the wrongs be right.
I hope you can tell by looking in my eyes, there's nothing left I could hide.
I can't promise everything will be easy but were stronger by one another's side.
When I lay down tonight will I be able to picture us in the stars.
Or will I be lost in sorrow in a world which was never ours.
I just can't picture that honey with all this love we have made.
I will be relentless holding onto you i'll be here every night and day.
So baby this is all that I am thats here before you in your light.
I can see in heaven your not a stranger, as they're missing one of there angels tonight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/9/2010 10:35:00 PM
Heartfelt write and I sure hope your heart's wish come true. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 1/9/2010 2:02:00 AM
Nice write. I hope she didn't close the door. Good luck. Thanks for sharing.
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