Home » Poems » Jackie Grace Natuha » Take Me To Sleep

Take Me To Sleep

Take me to sleep Sweet feel of all I have it in your tender touch I know it in the rhythm of your breath As you lay near me I have no scare For I know you care That’s why I am secure Take me to sleep Sweet feel of my life For you I would sleep So I can dream For you is the dream That I will forever dream So that when I awake I find the reality of you Always there Forever with me Sweet feel of all

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Paul Callus

Date: 7/15/2014 5:54:00 PM

This is a very lovely, sweet, romantic poem, Jackie! Welcome to soup and hope you make many friends here. // paul

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/30/2014 11:10:00 AM

nicely done Jackie, well penned indeed, take care, Gordon

Richard Nnoli

Date: 6/23/2014 5:33:00 PM

This is so sweet, keep on writeing please! Richard

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/18/2014 9:24:00 AM

Beautiful write, jackie! Well done!

Abigail Heart Of Ink

Date: 6/18/2014 8:45:00 AM

Happy to land on this

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2014 4:07:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jackie :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ugwu Cornelius Chidera

Date: 6/17/2014 12:15:00 PM

NICE POEM! I WELCOME YOU TO POETRYsoup with these W~elcome to poetrysoup. E~mblem of the best poetry website which gives you; l~ove that comes from richness of her words, c~ourage to harden your faith against writer's block, o~rientation toward being the best bard, m~emories about famous poems and poets. E~mbrace this lovely website JACKIE T~his is a caring community o~f all pleasant poems and prettiest poets. P~oet is a bard known for his o~rderly composition of words to e~ncourage love and peace, t~ransparent truth and reality, r~hymes of time and beauty of nature, y~ellowjournalism and comedy. S~oup is what we dissolve our food with. O~ne who dissolve his life in poetry soup will be u~pgraded.Please JACKIE cook for the world; "p~oetrysoup"

Skat A

Date: 6/17/2014 2:47:00 AM

Jackie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/16/2014 11:55:00 PM

This is such a sweet beautiful poem!!!! Loved it!

Muhereza Rodgers Roger

Date: 6/16/2014 11:43:00 PM

Jackie, welcome to PS I hope you enjoy every sweet moment here, You fell in with a land mark poem.. I think am in love with your heart of ink..RRC

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2014 11:28:00 PM

hi Jackie,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@