Take Me Out To the Ball Game

stifling afternoon over fence grand slam home run sunburn washing car 8/29/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/20/2021 11:38:00 AM

Been there, done that. Have the T-shirt. Are you peering into my memories?

Eve Roper
Date: 9/20/2021 1:02:00 PM

That was granddaughter, she did another Sat. and got the game ball again :) My boys always played in school

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2021 1:30:00 PM

I have fond memories of those "old ball games" Well done. Do you know the history of the song that is so famous? I used to teach it to my students and its importance in our sports culture

Judy Ball

Date: 8/31/2021 4:10:00 AM

Nicely done. This drips summer. Well done. God Bless and thanks for the lovely reviews. God Bless and could use some prayer if you don't mind. JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/30/2021 7:48:00 PM

Ah, summertime! A lovely senryu, Eve. :D

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/29/2021 10:59:00 PM

Seems you have some fun yesterday. Hugs.