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Take Me On Home

Take me on home for I've fought the fight, I'm drained and I'm tired let me rest tonight I did my very best but still lost the war, take me on home where the pain is never more The enemy was strong but I stood my ground, now take me on home where only You are found Remember me well for I tried and I tried please take me on home all my tears have been cried So take me on home I've finally said my piece, I'm now going to rest O God let all the problems cease. 10/14/2015 For "Are you there God?" contest sponsored by Silent One.

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Skat A

Date: 10/18/2015 4:44:00 PM

George, Nice to see you on Silent One's winning list. Congratulations on your win. --SKAT

George Aul
Date: 10/19/2015 9:56:00 AM

Thanks very much, SKAT........... George

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/16/2015 2:01:00 AM

Congrats on awesome win with this exquisite write George!

George Aul
Date: 10/16/2015 11:21:00 AM

Thank you very much, and congrats to you also........ George

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2015 5:36:00 PM

When my father died he was confident he was going to meet his lord and he passed away peacefully - its all we can hope for in the end - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul
Date: 10/16/2015 11:20:00 AM

Thank you for the nice comment......... George