Take Me Into the Eternal Beauty

Oh take me into the eternal 
Beauty of that world
Where I can sing a melody 
Adoring you my love
Where I can feel the freshness of 
Your ever refreshing breath
And can dive deep in to the charming
Beauty of your eye’s depths
Where beauty can fire me to fly
Higher and higher
And poetry can become a Moon to
Inspire and inspire

Oh take me into the eternal 
Beauty of that world
Where I can sing a melody 
Adoring you my love
Where I can feel the fragrance of life
When others have lost their roads
And are gloomy and sad without Hope
Where music can fill me 
With the joy of love & eternal happiness
Where sound can bring peace 
In my mind and heart

Oh take me into the eternal 
Beauty of that world 
Where my lyrics can become 
A song of the singing bird Koyal* 
Where my faith can bring a smile
On sad and gloomy faces 
Like the smile of a new born child    

Oh take me into the eternal beauty 
Of that world
Where I can sing a melody
Adoring you my love
And can get lost till I feel
The freshness of your ever refreshing breath

Ravindra

Kanpur 29th Nov. 2009




*A melody singing bird of India (like the Nightingale of John Keats)
Koyal mainly sings in the season of spring.
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Strand Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 1:24 AM
Like the kyrielle flavour Ravindra.Rgds Brian
Segal Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 5:34 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l4v6TD_QFL8 These are the most amazing love poems, if you go to you tube and listen, I know you will love them, love Simone
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November 29, 2009 at 6:22 AM
OMG, this is so beautiful, so romantic. Your love is strong and serves you well! Always keep your precious love close to you. Keep writing and I'll keep reading your lovely poetry. Thanks so much for sharing! Love Light Patty
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November 29, 2009 at 5:48 AM
A most refreshing read of nature, beauty and love....Most enjoyable. Thanks for your kindness of comment on my writes, good to see you; Anna-Marie.
Segal Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 4:33 AM
Really beautiful, a joy to read, very inspirational! love Simone
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November 29, 2009 at 4:17 AM
Beautiful and refreshing Rhyme. Nicely expressive of your love and passion. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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