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Take Me Away

Train, train, blow-steam train! My life awaits, with my maiden! My son has been born and I wish my jobs away! Take me away to the land he was made-in! Train, train, blow-steam train! Protect me from the men of the alleys and the women of trash! I must be back by 2 days come! For my son has been born at long last! The love of my life is will be seeing me home! Train, train, blow-steam train! You have failed me, the bandits have come aboard! They have taken the valuables, they have stolen many lives! They have come to me, and to me they'll slay, oh lord! Train, may I have one last wish, send my soul to my wife! My angel will be there to protect our son! Please my train, for my days are done...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2016 11:01:00 AM

Noah, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tim Smith

Date: 5/6/2016 10:40:00 AM

Very nice offering Noah. Keep writing because you do have talent. Now do your homework (sorry force of habit with my 8th grader).

Noah Cronnelly
Date: 5/6/2016 11:38:00 AM

Thanks! And I will do my future 8th grade homework! :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/5/2016 10:52:00 PM

Noah, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs

Skat A

Date: 5/5/2016 9:56:00 AM

Noah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Stephen Pennell

Date: 5/5/2016 9:19:00 AM

very good, my friend, welcome to the soup ,very sad at the end