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Take It In

Cool water washing over my feet ocean glistening where sky does meet soft sand sifting through my toes fresh sea breeze scents up my nose tiny little treasures hidden in the sand warmth of the sun giving life to the land swallows dancing with joy in the sky enjoying the sun as they flitter and fly butterflies emerging in the warmth of the day new life begins as they fly on their way.

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Debbie Knapp

Date: 7/13/2023 1:10:00 PM

Hi Paula, A beautiful poem full of life. The ocean is my happy place and so this a special poem to me. It is truly a blessing to see, hear, and smell. I really enjoyed it. Thank you, Debbie

Pivotal Poetry
Date: 7/13/2023 10:04:00 PM

It's my happy place too. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/13/2023 10:38:00 AM

Hello Paula Rowlands, Nature is beautiful. to hear a concert of the birds singing in the early morning. Is a lovely way to wake up. Mother nature shows her beautiful things in summer. Enjoy your day my friend. /DArlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2023 10:38:00 AM

Hello Paula, Mother nature is wonderful. A squirrel took over a birdhouse and made a nest. I was very surprised to see this happen. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Pivotal Poetry
Date: 7/13/2023 10:05:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, Mother Nature is wonderful. :)