Mick Talbot Poet Footle

Take Care of Yourself First

take care
be fair

yourself
your health

your dress
no mess

all's fine
you shine

your date
your fate

good night
delight

back home
on phone

refreshed
you meshed

adored
you scored

first place
won race

took care
you're there

read eye's
both wise

loves true
her, you

now you 
are two

Take Care of Yourself First Poetry Contest, sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 
07/14/18

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Charlie Smith July 14, 2018 at 10:40 AM Great Footie Mick, best wishes in the contest. Footies make my hair hurt. I'll leave them to you... Mick Talbot July 14, 2018 at 11:17 AM A bit of fun lol, Thanks Charlie, fingers crossed for the contest, Mick

Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2018 at 8:46 AM A lovely footle, friend! Oh their I go alliterating again ;) Mick Talbot July 14, 2018 at 10:14 AM Fine fettle you're in, I thank you Kim, to rhyme no sin, to end, well I'll fin, a few more assonances and an alliteration to begin. He he, Mick

Paris-Maree Boreham July 14, 2018 at 8:44 AM So cute Mick Talbot! Well written !! Thank you for sharing :) Mick Talbot July 14, 2018 at 10:16 AM My pleasure Paris-Maree and thank you for commenting, Mick