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You can take away my job Another line of work I will find You can take away my hair Going bald I really don’t mind You can take away my friends I am comfortable all alone You can take away my gadgets I have no use for a cell phone You can take away my memories My past is best forgot You can take away my possessions I really don’t have a lot You can take away my money I will live a beggar’s life I could get used to no more nagging, so You can take away my wife You can take away my sight For I can still see without my eyes You can take away my wardrobe I like being naked, no surprise You can take away my house With a shopping cart I will roam But you cannot take away my words I’ve secured them in my poems

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/24/2012 9:58:00 AM
And your poems will live on forever, your words are treasured : )
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Date: 5/18/2011 2:04:00 PM
Well an emphatic statement Joe and makes the reader really think my friend.. our words can never be taken by anyone.. they remain our gift to us and to all who read.. really enjoyed this one ...one of your very best luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 1:22:00 PM
well written - like you I hope my words are remembered
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:08:00 AM
yeah I like it very much...well done.....best wishes
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:44:00 AM
You cannot take away our Joe for we will not let him go! Braille forever
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:57:00 AM
people underestimate the power that lies in a person's words...I like this one...well done...have a great day! ~ shauna
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