Elizabeth O'Driscoll Poet Rhyme

Take a Walk With Me

Take a walk with me
In loving harmony
I will wrap you in my arms
Beside the river Lee
We will listen to the river dance
In tranquil melody
As from the mountains high
It waltzes to the sea
As we bathe in the ripples of love
That flow through you and me

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David Scott January 30, 2013 at 11:56 AM BLISS MATE LOVE IT IF I COULD FIND ITWICKED WRITE YOU HAVE SOUP X DAVIDSCOTT

Harry Horsman January 28, 2013 at 10:14 AM this is amazing Elizabeth, so romantic,, and the Title,,, very tempting Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 28, 2013 at 12:46 PM :) Thank you Harry, I have my moments.. don't worry I won't let you fall in :) love Elizabeth

Carl Harris January 27, 2013 at 2:04 PM Your apt words painted a vivid scene, Elizabeth, in this very well expressed romantic poem. Your two closing lines said it all so well! Carl. Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 27, 2013 at 2:51 PM Thank you Carl, love Elizabeth