Take a Moment

So many times we fail to see
Why we’re able to live free
We take for granted it’s the way
It’s supposed to be
Oh but there’s millions of reasons why
Lying in the bloodied ground
We walk the backwoods
And open fields of our hometown
Never thinking about the price
Of our feet walking on the grass and dirt
Paid for in blood of the millions
Who long ago passed this way
Just so on this very day
We can walk where we please
As free as ever man has been
We look around us
But mostly see our own gripes
We act as though
Everything is owed us
The world revolves around our needs
Only one thing matters
Just what we feel 
We deserve today
But buried in the ground
We think we own
Are the stories told in blood
Of why we’re able to make our claim
And walk as free men
Through the backwoods and open fields
Of our hometown
So take a moment to kiss the ground
Thank the millions
Who came before us
Just so on this very day
We can walk 
Where we please

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/4/2010 12:41:00 PM
Exceptional write, Mike. Goes to my favs today! God bless you. Happy July 4th to you! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 7/4/2010 9:31:00 AM
I can certainly relate to your thoughts, Mike. Even today as we celebrate independence, we should not forget the lives that were sacrified so we could live free. Well stated! Love, Carolyn
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