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Take A Lowly Pride

We all start From form zero That's what I know. Why take much pride When we came none And nothing else. Why look upon Up everyone If we are none. We owe one life Not brag have we In all this life.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/22/2025 2:49:00 PM

Hello Hugo, I agree we should not brag what we have in life. First of bragging gets a person nowhere. It makes the other person feel badly about themselves. Much love here. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 2/22/2025 5:57:00 PM

You're exactly right, Darlene. Self-pride is wrong when it's destructive. Good pride worth lead us to repentance. That is godly. I love what you said, Darlene./Hugo.