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Take a Dive

I take a dive from a precipice.
To escape my life as it is.
Deep water, deep gulp of air
on resurfacing, new life to share.
Thrilled now that I dare.

26/03/2016

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Line Gauthier

January 5, 2018 at 11:09 AM

Awesome poem. Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray

January 5, 2018 at 2:34 PM

Thank you Line. It's about the breakup of my marriage.

Poet Destroyer A

April 6, 2016 at 11:20 PM

Jean, Congrats on your "When A Door Closes WIN." Luv ~LINDA~

Jean Murray

April 7, 2016 at 1:49 AM

As always, thank you for your support Linda.

Vladislav Raven

April 5, 2016 at 6:08 PM

Hi Jean, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your write, short, snappy, to the point, excellent indeed....Mike.

Jean Murray

April 5, 2016 at 11:24 PM

It's how I felt at the time Mike. That was one hell of a jump. It hurts when your heart crash lands. Thanks for stopping by.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 4, 2016 at 3:19 AM

Yet another lovely win Jean.. big congrats!

Jean Murray

April 4, 2016 at 3:30 AM

Thank you Umpa.

Jan Allison

April 4, 2016 at 1:01 AM

so glad you took the plunge and resurfaced... it is the initial dive that is the key to your happiness now Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

April 4, 2016 at 3:29 AM

True. Hugs Jan .

Daniel Turner

March 27, 2016 at 9:57 AM

That's what it takes sometimes, just take the plunge. Hello Jean. Hope you're having fun. Peace my friend:)

Jean Murray

March 27, 2016 at 11:45 AM

Did you laugh at my spelling mistake? I often do. Having a nice relaxing time losing all track of time. No nightclubs. I must be getting old. Hope you are well.