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Take a Dive

I take a dive from a precipice. To escape my life as it is. Deep water, deep gulp of air on resurfacing, new life to share. Thrilled now that I dare. 26/03/2016

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/5/2018 11:09:00 AM

Awesome poem. Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/5/2018 2:34:00 PM

Thank you Line. It's about the breakup of my marriage.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 11:20:00 PM

Jean, Congrats on your "When A Door Closes WIN." Luv ~LINDA~

Jean Murray
Date: 4/7/2016 1:49:00 AM

As always, thank you for your support Linda.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/5/2016 6:08:00 PM

Hi Jean, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your write, short, snappy, to the point, excellent indeed....Mike.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/5/2016 11:24:00 PM

It's how I felt at the time Mike. That was one hell of a jump. It hurts when your heart crash lands. Thanks for stopping by.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/4/2016 3:19:00 AM

Yet another lovely win Jean.. big congrats!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/4/2016 3:30:00 AM

Thank you Umpa.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2016 1:01:00 AM

so glad you took the plunge and resurfaced... it is the initial dive that is the key to your happiness now Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 4/4/2016 3:29:00 AM

True. Hugs Jan .

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/27/2016 9:57:00 AM

That's what it takes sometimes, just take the plunge. Hello Jean. Hope you're having fun. Peace my friend:)

Jean Murray
Date: 3/27/2016 11:45:00 AM

Did you laugh at my spelling mistake? I often do. Having a nice relaxing time losing all track of time. No nightclubs. I must be getting old. Hope you are well.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/26/2016 11:41:00 PM

Inspiring, I fear I would dive and never resurface! :)

Jean Murray
Date: 3/27/2016 1:10:00 AM

It was either sink or swim Arthur. If I knew what lay ahead, I may have taken that deep gulp under warter.Thank you for dropping by.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/26/2016 7:53:00 PM

sounds wonderful, jean - both the action and they way you've described it...

Jean Murray
Date: 3/26/2016 8:49:00 PM

It was out of the cold water into the heat of hell Ilene,emotionally speaking,but worth it in the end.