Take a Break!

Too much of a video game
May lead someone to shame
LIfe you will then maim!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 4:39 PM
hahahaha my thoughts exactly. Now just don't go saying the same thing about Soup because I am really addicted!!!!
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