Gert W. Knop Poet Senryu

Tage/Days/Días

Die Tage verlieren sich
Im Nebel der Einsamkeit 
Tautropfen im Wind

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Days are being lost 
In the fog of loneliness  
Dewdrops in the wind

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Los días se pierden 
En la niebla de soledad
Gotas de rocío en el viento

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Daniel Cwiak June 9, 2010 at 9:29 AM Wunderbar, Gert! Schreiben mehr!! Dan C

Poet Destroyer A June 7, 2010 at 7:49 PM how did I miss this one, enjoyed and congratulations. a very good job and Senryu,..Sidney leeAnn

Margaret Foster June 4, 2010 at 2:06 AM Congratulations, A very nice haiku Gert. well done...Margaret

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 3, 2010 at 10:01 PM Super congrats on your win with this wonderful haiku, Gert :)--each line is a gem---& you're very welcome to my explanations, I enjoyed writing them, haha I love food--have a fun day now! :)

Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2010 at 2:47 PM VERRRY nice!!

Brandee Augustus June 3, 2010 at 1:30 PM I love the dreaminess od your first two lines. Very nice! Congratulations on you first place win!

Sara Kendrick June 3, 2010 at 1:03 PM I needed to have read this one yesterday for I had a really bad day...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about his equinox....Sad to met the equal that would be right for us and it not work out....Sara

Ray Dillard June 2, 2010 at 9:14 PM I'm impressed by your obvious talent. Congratulations and keep on trucking! RAY

Debbie Guzzi June 2, 2010 at 5:43 PM just beautiful and the display of language impressive. Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire June 2, 2010 at 5:39 PM Congratulations on your first-place win, Gert! Much deserved recognition for this Gem! Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman June 2, 2010 at 5:36 PM what a wonderful haiku! congratulations on your win harry

Amy Green June 2, 2010 at 3:48 PM This is so beautiful, and TRUE that it is scary. Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 2, 2010 at 3:23 PM Super big congrats Gert on your 1st place win in the haiku You contest with this great write.. u enjoy my friend.. this one is terrific ..do that victory dance now..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Doris Culverhouse May 31, 2010 at 5:06 PM beautiful write, enjoyed reading on this memorial day!!

Carolyn Devonshire May 30, 2010 at 3:44 PM You are so creative and have the capacity to create mood through amazing images, Gert. "Dewdrops in the wind -- the fog of loneliness." Thanks for assuring us that we are not alone when we feel this way. Love, Carolyn

Skat A May 30, 2010 at 3:35 PM GREAT PERSPECTIVE, ENJOYED