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Tacitus Holloon

F=G m1. M2/d2 Molten saltine solution Manmade magma Pow'ring turbines Larder lake Ontario song Sings brilliantly through the night Then shall Those sweet tastes Make mornings Extra special She steamed Maine steamers Manors some Caul them And sauced them in Wine Heavy cream Olive oil Chives And garlic An evening were A xylophone called To a band of Percussion, horns Ten string a flute One basset guitar And a tenor guitar We danced On a tounge and Grooved floor And fell exhausted In love. From Vespasian licinius' Myth of Music Sensual sounds

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Date: 2/23/2024 11:47:00 AM
Hey, Allan, Your unique approach to poetry, incorporating scientific elements with culinary and musical imagery, is genuinely fascinating. Blending scientific concepts with vivid descriptions of food and music creates rich imagery and emotion. It's like embarking on a sensory journey through the cosmos, indulging in delicious flavors and captivating melodies along the way. Your poem evokes a sense of wonder and joy, inviting the reader to explore the depths of the universe while savoring life's simple pleasures. It's a beautiful interconnectedness of all things and the beauty surrounding us daily. - Blessings, Daniel
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