Taboo Haiku

Taboo Haiku

Bamboo skirt lifts scents
Flavors of river desires
Absorbs each other
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 2:06 AM
Nice observation nicely displayed in words, Earl
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September 19, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, I appreciate your views. I wrote Taboo Haiku, Cuckoo Haiku and Kayak Haiku recently because the words and sounds of the words are a perfect marriage to haiku in my estimation. It took me some time to bring the proper elements together here in this one. Thank you for commenting. Have a great week end. Earl
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