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Taboo Haiku

Taboo Haiku Bamboo skirt lifts scents Flavors of river desires Absorbs each other

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Date: 9/19/2014 2:06:00 AM
Nice observation nicely displayed in words, Earl
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 9/19/2014 8:52:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, I appreciate your views. I wrote Taboo Haiku, Cuckoo Haiku and Kayak Haiku recently because the words and sounds of the words are a perfect marriage to haiku in my estimation. It took me some time to bring the proper elements together here in this one. Thank you for commenting. Have a great week end. Earl

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