T a N I K a L A

Walang laya niya'ng ginugol ang kahapong pait ang hatol
Tanikala'ng nag-uugnay sa kabiyak ng kaluluwa ay naputol, 
Huminto sa pagtakbo, ngatal na napaluhod, humagulgol
Ano ba'ng dusa ito, tanikala'ng ginamit, bakit kinalawang at napurol? 

Kinaladkad ang tanikala, pilit kumawala
Subalit hindi mawari, bakit nakakabit, ang hirap lumaya, 
Hinubad na ang lahat, iniwan pati ang pag-asa'ng ligaya
Ngunit sa tanikala'ng nakakabit ay sadya'ng mahirap ang paglaya.

Pilit iniiwas ang sarili, hinayaang tanikala'y kumapit
Hinayaang maramdaman ang hapdi ng hapit, sa kanya'y may hatid na pait, 
Nangako'ng hindi na tututol sa hila ng tanikala'ng nabanggit
At hayaan na lamang dumating ang magsasalba sa kanyang pagkakapiit.

Di niya akalain, sa di sinasadyang pagkakataon
Isang ligaw na mananaliksik sa kanyang teritoryo biglang nataon, 
Hinawi ang kanyang tanikala, kinalag ang nakakapit na pag-asa
Upang muli ay magkaroon siya ng ligaya na dapat na matamasa.

Ang tanikala ay natunaw, sa tindi ng parating na apoy
Nagliliyab, batid ng puso ang dikta'ng tinutukoy, 
Hinangad muli'ng makamtan ang tunay na tanikala
Na magsisilbing hatak sa kanya sa pag-ibig na hatid ay ligaya.

Halika na, mahal ko, sana'y maramdaman mo
Samyo at init ng tanikala'ng matatamo
Tigib sa pag-ibig, hindi na dapat pa'ng sumamo
Ang pulido'ng tanikala ay tiyak matatamasa mo! 

Halika na, Mahal ko... 
Lalagi ka'ng tanikala sa puso't isip ko...
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Lamoureux Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:36 PM
I do not understand but I find the rythme to be intriguing.
Whispers Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 1:56 AM
Haha...thanks Richard. It is about having the chain on being married - wanting to be freed from it.
A   Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Hi Inner,,, , Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
Whispers Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 4:19 AM
Oh my...thanks for the info, Linda! I thought my poem won't be chosen. An honor really!
Mehta Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 5:24 AM
A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, inner
Whispers Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 4:18 AM
wow...i made it thanks Dr. Ram!
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Maligayang pagdating sa mundo ng mga makata!!! ....It's a big pleasure to have you with us, kababayan..!!! ...a deep and very romantic lines...you are a good one..keep it up!! ..Keep your pen high!!! ...Welcome to PoetrySoup...!!! huggs__AiyaH__=)
Torres Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 9:50 AM
sorry dear.. ij ust read your comment... yup! marami tayong mga Pinoy dito...but mostly naka-base narin sa Us and other countries... some here are Nette onclaud, binibining p.inK, Darren knows filipino, too....ME! ..hehe ...at marami pang iba..even Leonora Galinta....so in favor of majorities ( foreign members) ..we MUST post English poems :))
Whispers Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:13 PM
btw, Aiyah...may mga filipino poet din ba dito and is it ok to post filipino poems here? Wala kc akong nababasang filipino poems pa.
Whispers Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:04 PM
haha...your comment inspire me more. I will Aiyah...Thank you.
A   Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:08 AM
I have to look up the titled word, Inner Whispers, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and offer positive feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to getting to know you and your poetry :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Whispers Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:08 PM
Hi...thank you for the warm welcome. I have less knowledge about poem structures and all coz i just write down my feelings. I would love reading poems here to learn more. And of course, would love to have you guide me. Thank you very much.
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 3:08 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,I.W. :) - I choose your first poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Whispers Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:09 PM
Thank you Anne Lise...i hope my poems wont bore you, lol...coz i am more on free verse/rhyme kind of a writer. Thank you for the warm welcome. Be blessed all the time!
A  Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 1:18 AM
you have a beautiful poetry name, Inner Whisper, . , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
Whispers Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:11 PM
my first mentor who welcomed me here, hello. Thank you for that warm welcoming arms. I think i will be staying here more. Have a nice day.
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