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Syzygy

Turquoise tides, scintillating traces drape hushed prairies in indigo hues. Dancing to ballads of wild breeze, love soaks enchanting moonlit waves, down the crevice in galactic syzygy; blend me in your halo. Syzygy is a linear configuration of celestial bodies by conjunction or opposition(usually during lunar or solar eclipse). It also represents the fusion or a pair of opposing elements(for instance, the conscious and the subconscious minds). May 23, 2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Theme 3: Syzygy Winner: First Place BRIAN'S SELECT 6,any form,any theme Winner: Honorable Mention

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Date: 6/9/2020 1:40:00 AM
Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading this poem of celestial beauty. Best wishes. Rashi
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/9/2020 8:19:00 AM
So glad you loved my words dear Rashi. Thank you for your appreciation. God bless you :)
Date: 6/8/2020 12:28:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Aditi--congrats on your TOP win--so well deserved!
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thank you for your blessed words of appreciation Vijay :)
Date: 6/8/2020 10:56:00 AM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved first-place win with this beautiful, creative piece, Aditi. Janice
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:57:00 PM
Blessed by your wonderful words of appreciation Janice. Much love :)
Date: 6/8/2020 4:49:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Verily "syzygystic" poetically! God bless you.
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful words of appreciation and blessings Beata. Much love :)
Date: 6/8/2020 1:02:00 AM
This is so good on so many levels, especially love the mystery it evokes - congrats on your win - stay safe - Baron
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:06:00 AM
Glad you love it Baron. Thank you so much for your wonderful words of appreciation :)
Date: 6/7/2020 11:28:00 PM
You did your homework on this beauty Aditi. Congratulations on your most impressive poem winning the top spot! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:05:00 AM
Blessed by your wonderful words of appreciation Connie. Thank you so much. Much love and blessings :) Take care.
Date: 6/7/2020 1:45:00 PM
love love love this, Aditi. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:05:00 AM
So glad you loved it Andrea. Thank you so much for your appreciation. Much love :)
Date: 6/7/2020 1:45:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great first place in the contest, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/8/2020 7:04:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful words of appreciation :) Blessings Anne.
Date: 6/7/2020 12:42:00 PM
Electric with energy and images! Congratulations on your first place win, Aditi.
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:04:00 AM
Thank you for your uplifting words of appreciation Sam. Blessings :)
Date: 6/7/2020 6:09:00 AM
Wow, absolutely stunning poetry, Aditi:-) Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 6/7/2020 6:18:00 AM
Thank you for your generous appreciation and for my placement in your contest Edward. Blessings :)
Date: 5/29/2020 1:18:00 PM
My goodness such brilliance with this spectacular poem! A Fave for me. So happy you are here on the soup. Chantelle hugs xx
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/29/2020 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for your warm words of appreciation Chantelle. I feel blessed to be with talented encouraging poets like you. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 5/24/2020 4:55:00 AM
A gorgeously informative poem, that has such a tender delicacy, typed in exactly the right style and pattern!
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Date: 5/24/2020 5:37:00 AM
I am glad you loved it. Thank you for your words of encouragement Caren :)
Date: 5/23/2020 11:14:00 PM
Ooh, this is deep and mysterious, like the stars. I love the colors, the nature references, the alluring curve on the left side and the surprising ending. All this makes for a beautiful and mystical effect. Well done, Aditi. Stay inspired, my friend
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Date: 5/24/2020 5:37:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation like always dear friend. You encourage me to explore more of this. God bless you :)
Date: 5/23/2020 4:14:00 AM
WOW, am speechless!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2020 4:24:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Jan :)