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System Or Student

they go to school receive cap and gown why can't they read and write? ©Holly P. Moore December 2012 Richard Lamoureux's QuestionKu Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2012 2:15:00 PM

Hello Holly, stopping by to say hi... going through a few of your poems.. LOL..the titles that stand out to me, already have my comment... I'll be back later on tonight, to visit your latest poem..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2012 3:42:00 PM

VERY good one!!! Congrats on the winners list.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/11/2012 7:56:00 AM

Hi Holly, good Questionku, wish I had the answer. Thanks so much for entry.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/11/2012 4:33:00 AM

Congrats on your winning spot Holly and an excellent question love xx

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/11/2012 2:00:00 AM

A well thought out quetionku to a problem that continues to plague our schools. Congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:39:00 PM

a wonderful questionku... one of the best.. this happens more than you know.... good luck in the contest..pd

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/8/2012 7:35:00 AM

system

David Williams

Date: 12/8/2012 2:27:00 AM

Holly I like this a lot, good luck....David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2012 4:26:00 PM

Good joining of concept & grammar with lines 1 & 2...haiku is a process and a prayer ;) keep at it the joy is in the trying..this works for me as a modern haiku ;)...Light & Love

Holly Moore
Date: 12/7/2012 6:32:00 PM

Thank you for your adivce. This is actually a QuestionKu, so I think the format maybe a little diifferent. I'll check into it...xxoo Holly

Janet Muthoni

Date: 12/7/2012 7:35:00 AM

awesome write Holly.....:) much hug Janet

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2012 5:18:00 AM

A good question, Holly. - Well written! Hope your weekend will be fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)