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System Or Student

they go to school
receive cap and gown
why can't they read and write?

©Holly P. Moore
   December 2012

Richard Lamoureux's QuestionKu Contest

graduationintrospectionhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

December 17, 2012 at 2:15 PM

Hello Holly, stopping by to say hi... going through a few of your poems.. LOL..the titles that stand out to me, already have my comment... I'll be back later on tonight, to visit your latest poem..pd

Andrea Dietrich

December 11, 2012 at 3:42 PM

VERY good one!!! Congrats on the winners list.

Richard Lamoureux

December 11, 2012 at 7:56 AM

Hi Holly, good Questionku, wish I had the answer. Thanks so much for entry.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 11, 2012 at 4:33 AM

Congrats on your winning spot Holly and an excellent question love xx

Vicky Tsiluma

December 11, 2012 at 2:00 AM

A well thought out quetionku to a problem that continues to plague our schools. Congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 9:39 PM

a wonderful questionku... one of the best.. this happens more than you know.... good luck in the contest..pd

Kathryn Collins

December 8, 2012 at 7:35 AM

system

David Williams

December 8, 2012 at 2:27 AM

Holly I like this a lot, good luck....David

Debbie Guzzi

December 7, 2012 at 4:26 PM

Good joining of concept & grammar with lines 1 & 2...haiku is a process and a prayer ;) keep at it the joy is in the trying..this works for me as a modern haiku ;)...Light & Love

Holly Moore

December 7, 2012 at 6:32 PM

Thank you for your adivce. This is actually a QuestionKu, so I think the format maybe a little diifferent. I'll check into it...xxoo Holly