Bernardo F. Asuncion Poet Haiku

synthetic student hiku

For Brian Strand's 1390 Poetry Contest

18 June 2025

        _________
       |                |
       |     0  0     |   
       |      ==     |   boundless circuits hum—  
       |________ |
          ||||||||
      /|________|\    
    /_/              \_\ thoughts without a beating heart  
    | |                | |
    |_|     ____   |_|
     ||    |____|   ||   learn to dream like men.
     ||                 ||    
    /_|               |_\
   |__|              |__|

  
  Date Judged: 6/19/2025 1:47:00 PM
  1st Place

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Sara Kendrick June 22, 2025 at 3:47 AM Congratulations on your winner. Creative indeed. I wonder what would happen if AI could go to school. Way to go. Sara K

JC Brul June 19, 2025 at 3:35 PM Whoa!! This is so cool! Congratulations bro. Bernard. Stay creative! ^___^ JCB Bernardo F. Asuncion June 20, 2025 at 2:52 AM Thanks, dear Sister JCB. That's why I abhor AI poems hehe.