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Symphony of Wheat

Divinely composed, Conducted by the soft breeze: Orchestra of grains.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 9/10/2009 6:50:00 PM

Magical words.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 9/8/2009 7:32:00 PM

This reminds me of home. The wind rolling across the fields in a rythem that puts you in a trance. Thanks for the comments. Nate.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2009 3:56:00 PM

Another outstanding write I have read of yours today Raul. You are the King of Haiku. Love, Carol

Date: 9/8/2009 3:49:00 PM

I like the way you use imagery and this concise form for uplifting views. This is another example of your creative insight. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen

James Peranteau

Date: 9/8/2009 3:03:00 PM

I've heard it to Raul !! This Haiku goes in mine fav's !!!! Awesome !!! james

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/8/2009 2:54:00 PM

Very nice Haiku Raul! Thank you also for your comments on my harvest haiku, it is greatly appreciated! ~Trudy~

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/8/2009 2:40:00 PM

Nice tribute to the "bread of life". Keep 'em coming! Yours Matthew Anish

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/8/2009 1:08:00 PM

Well written Haiku, Raul and thank you for your comment. Gert

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/8/2009 6:29:00 AM

Divinely composed---symphony of wheat...Orchestra of sands..well conducted once more..Charma

Christopher Higgins

Date: 9/8/2009 3:47:00 AM

Mail..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/8/2009 1:46:00 AM

Raul, This haiku enlivens the senses. I could almost smell the breeze as specks of grain floating on warm air found their way to my face... So much is said in so few words. You are a master! Lovingly, Dane

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/7/2009 9:38:00 PM

Nice write Raul......:JP}

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/7/2009 7:23:00 PM

orchestra of grains, man thats bad!!!!!!!!!

Jen H.

Date: 9/7/2009 7:07:00 PM

Beautifully written Raul. I loved every word. ~Jen~