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Symphony of Wheat

Divinely composed,
Conducted by the soft breeze:
Orchestra of grains.

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Tyler Martin

September 10, 2009 at 6:50 PM

Magical words.

Nathan Leccese

September 8, 2009 at 7:32 PM

This reminds me of home. The wind rolling across the fields in a rythem that puts you in a trance. Thanks for the comments. Nate.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 8, 2009 at 3:56 PM

Another outstanding write I have read of yours today Raul. You are the King of Haiku. Love, Carol

September 8, 2009 at 3:49 PM

I like the way you use imagery and this concise form for uplifting views. This is another example of your creative insight. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen

James Peranteau

September 8, 2009 at 3:03 PM

I've heard it to Raul !! This Haiku goes in mine fav's !!!! Awesome !!! james

Trudy Diane Rider

September 8, 2009 at 2:54 PM

Very nice Haiku Raul! Thank you also for your comments on my harvest haiku, it is greatly appreciated! ~Trudy~

Matthew Anish

September 8, 2009 at 2:40 PM

Nice tribute to the "bread of life". Keep 'em coming! Yours Matthew Anish

Gert W. Knop

September 8, 2009 at 1:08 PM

Well written Haiku, Raul and thank you for your comment. Gert

Charmaine Chircop

September 8, 2009 at 6:29 AM

Divinely composed---symphony of wheat...Orchestra of sands..well conducted once more..Charma

Christopher Higgins

September 8, 2009 at 3:47 AM

Mail..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

September 8, 2009 at 1:46 AM

Raul, This haiku enlivens the senses. I could almost smell the breeze as specks of grain floating on warm air found their way to my face... So much is said in so few words. You are a master! Lovingly, Dane