Symphony of Wheat

Divinely composed,
Conducted by the soft breeze:
Orchestra of grains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/10/2009 6:50:00 PM
Magical words.
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Date: 9/8/2009 7:32:00 PM
This reminds me of home. The wind rolling across the fields in a rythem that puts you in a trance. Thanks for the comments. Nate.
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Date: 9/8/2009 3:56:00 PM
Another outstanding write I have read of yours today Raul. You are the King of Haiku. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2009 3:49:00 PM
I like the way you use imagery and this concise form for uplifting views. This is another example of your creative insight. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 9/8/2009 3:03:00 PM
I've heard it to Raul !! This Haiku goes in mine fav's !!!! Awesome !!! james
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:54:00 PM
Very nice Haiku Raul! Thank you also for your comments on my harvest haiku, it is greatly appreciated! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:40:00 PM
Nice tribute to the "bread of life". Keep 'em coming! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/8/2009 1:08:00 PM
Well written Haiku, Raul and thank you for your comment. Gert
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Date: 9/8/2009 6:29:00 AM
Divinely composed---symphony of wheat...Orchestra of sands..well conducted once more..Charma
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Date: 9/8/2009 3:47:00 AM
Mail..
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Date: 9/8/2009 1:46:00 AM
Raul, This haiku enlivens the senses. I could almost smell the breeze as specks of grain floating on warm air found their way to my face... So much is said in so few words. You are a master! Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 9/7/2009 9:38:00 PM
Nice write Raul......:JP}
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:23:00 PM
orchestra of grains, man thats bad!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:07:00 PM
Beautifully written Raul. I loved every word. ~Jen~
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