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Poetic Form: Lyric
Inspired: 2024 August 20
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"Just breathe, you're having your breath taken, 'Aweigh anchors away,' the blessed follows," ... by The Poet

The unnoticeable lulls a fancy
as obscurity stares at a lost
such are promotions
of a trance
stages all ages
a momentous chance
for lifetime promise of romance
shattering glimmering
convinces glimpses
alarm bells--"Hush little baby don't--OH NO!"
"Release the Kraken ... or mices ... an ant if you have any?"
She comes, A ROWER?
It's The Specifics of the Ocean
Those islanders will come out - rigging
and surfing, Aurora, in a pipeline ... she's a dreamer ...
OH NO! WIPEout, its ecliptic ... but there at the ocean's edge
o'er the horizon, Aurora, RISE
the shacks are empty, the fields aplenty
The Drums of the Islands, Aloha Alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 8/21/2024 9:48:00 AM
Nice poem
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/21/2024 1:38:00 PM
Thanks, Jay. Aloha William

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