Stephen Parker Poet Rhyme

Symmetry

Two parts worth a share
Two shares, without a care
Two cares, feelings laid bare
Two bears, load lighter fare
Two fares, frugality must pair
Two pairs, progeny in lair
Two lairs, income to spare
Two spares, equity to declare
Two declares, faithful in prayer
Two prayers, escape temptation's snare

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Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2011 at 10:50 PM Interesting way to show this concept of symmetry, Stephen. And all in monorhyme!

Wandering Butterfly March 10, 2011 at 6:41 AM Interesting, your talent shines in this one stephan, excellent use of words...thanks for commenting my poetry. -Miranda-

Jimmy Anderson March 9, 2011 at 12:57 PM I wish you could have worked an eclair in there....lol Very nice....Jimmy

James Rasmusson March 9, 2011 at 5:21 AM Hi Stephen, so glad you enjoyed Lady Lemming. Yes, it was a complicated relationship. I want to thank you for using the word 'panoply'. That's the very word I was trying to remember the other day. It looks like the muse sent it to me through you. I like the word play you did in "Symmetry" (above).