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Symmetry

Two parts worth a share Two shares, without a care Two cares, feelings laid bare Two bears, load lighter fare Two fares, frugality must pair Two pairs, progeny in lair Two lairs, income to spare Two spares, equity to declare Two declares, faithful in prayer Two prayers, escape temptation's snare

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2011 10:50:00 PM

Interesting way to show this concept of symmetry, Stephen. And all in monorhyme!

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 3/10/2011 6:41:00 AM

Interesting, your talent shines in this one stephan, excellent use of words...thanks for commenting my poetry. -Miranda-

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/9/2011 12:57:00 PM

I wish you could have worked an eclair in there....lol Very nice....Jimmy

James Rasmusson

Date: 3/9/2011 5:21:00 AM

Hi Stephen, so glad you enjoyed Lady Lemming. Yes, it was a complicated relationship. I want to thank you for using the word 'panoply'. That's the very word I was trying to remember the other day. It looks like the muse sent it to me through you. I like the word play you did in "Symmetry" (above).