Symbiosis

torture pain and death
unselfishly I embraced
for you to have life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 23, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Anthony Pabon, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 16, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Anthony, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
Cee Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 5:24 AM
Hi Anthony! I love the imagery here and the emotion features here that you can sacrifice what you have for the sake of your love one.---Keep Smiling---Elai. Hope you can visit my page and read my poems. God bless you!
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April 13, 2013 at 5:38 AM
Wish there was more love in the world-Well done haiku, Anthony - Wishing you a wonderful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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