Notes About The Poem

Written for the contest: I'm looking at the Haiku in the Mirror, sponsored by Matt Caliri.

Syllables Expressed

capture a moment
of nature in the present ~
penned in syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 3:05 PM
very well done. Nice to share a win with you and the others on the list. Congrats.
Kitchin Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Andrea, thank you, hugs.
Caliri Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 8:24 PM
Nice and tight. Great work! You've been awarded with HM out of 71 entries!
Kitchin Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 4:01 AM
Matt, thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 2:12 PM
A wonderful Haiku write. Few words with much said. "Good Luck" Have a great day writing away.............
Kitchin Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 4:00 PM
Paula, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 1:26 PM
... well done, Tania - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you, hugs.
Tor Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Love your theme reflective of your words Tania. Much luck for the contest...
Kitchin Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Michael, thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 2:46 PM
I enjoyed this Haiku write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day/week...................
Kitchin Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Paula, thank you.
Ashley Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 8:43 AM
Dear Tania, beautiful brevity! Nature captured in the breath of the moment makes for a dynamic snapshot haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kitchin Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:44 PM
Susan, thank you.
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 4:20 PM
excellent description Tania xx
Kitchin Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Jan, thank you, hugs.
Pandit Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 3:18 PM
A haiku on haiku succinctly delivered, Tania. It is all about nature--a moment in time--as you say.
Kitchin Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:56 AM
Vjay, thank you, and that is my way of writing them.
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