Sycamore Tree

giant sycamore
                                             branches reaching to heaven --
                                                        a shady haven


          2/19/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Beautiful image on giant sycamore, the top branches with leaves makes a hanging shady space you called it shady heaven. Well done. Loved always, bl
Longfall Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 11:26 AM
Kim you write beautiful Haiku's! I once gave feedback to a writer who asked for critical feedback, I said that although I loved the write he called it a Haiku and there was nothing of nature in it. He was not polite afterwards, lol. Wonderfully written!
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 12:46 PM
Beautiful visual Kim. Warm Smiles, Connie
Babcock Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 11:24 AM
I would love to see one of these trees. Nice haiku Kim. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl
Squyres Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 10:43 AM
That's where I have my glider.... so relaxing in the spring and summer. Lovely haiku !!
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 5:40 PM
I think that I shall never see a poem as lovely as a tree!! Was that how it went? This reminds me of that. Also of the new movie Safe Haven that I just saw. you would love that romantic movie.
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:11 AM
Very good descriptive work..I can just see the scene..Those are such beautiful trees which grow to massive size if allowed the room..They do creative yard work though with the leaves, balls, and bark..Thanks for stopping by..Your reviews are always uplifting..Sara
Bauer Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 10:01 AM
lovely, kim!
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