Sworn To Secrecy

Of diff'rent lives we often speak, When we are left out; all alone And when we feel so old and weak- We know it's all we've ever known Our lives outside our inner shell, That place inside our secret Hell To all are Sheep they sweetly weep- A Wolf! (no one can tell)

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Robin Davis

Date: 12/20/2013 4:52:00 PM

Chan This is an interesting and creative write. What does lie underneath each persons soul and inner depths. Good write my friend Thanks for the awesome comment on my Christmas and Children poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/21/2013 8:04:00 AM

Thanks again, Robin :)

April Gabriella

Date: 8/24/2013 11:05:00 PM

Something about this.... I really like it.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/25/2013 9:06:00 AM

Thanks, again! This piece is a little ambiguous as to what it means, and the ironic thing is that sometimes I don't even quite know how to interpret one of my own poems. These thoughts and images just flow me from me and at times I can't make sense of them, so I am always interested to see how someone else interprets it :)