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Poetic Form: Verse
Inspired: 2023 December 01
*4h Place*
A VERSE
Contest Judged: 2023 December 09
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Image: Bent parking meters, downtown Hilo, Hawaii by the University of Washington
stealth
makes a sound
goes like this,
S W O O S H
death
makes a sound
goes like this,
S W O O S H
graves
makes a sound
goes like this,
S W O O S H
living
makes a sound
goes like this,
... ... ... ... ... >>>
Hilo Town
its bayfront
underwater
widest part
funnel shaped
its mouth face
out towards
... the sea
Hilo Bay
underwater
smallest part
funnel shaped
its spout face
in towards
... Hilo Town
S W O O S H ...
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2023
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