Swoosh

swoosh ~
at august sunrise
first step on the dock



AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 6:02 AM
I could almost smell the water.
Gauthier Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 6:41 PM
Yes. Lovely feeling.
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