Swoon By the Light of the Moon

Moonlight and bright eyes caress
Hands sizzle when they touch
A gaze says so much not less
Sweet words and lies are icing as such
Heartstrings sing on a right hunch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Romantic sizzle - lover where it takes you. Thank you Doris for visiting and all your kind words.
Culverhouse Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 2:39 PM
you are welcome, do you have a book published? you really are talented.
Maverick Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:42 AM
Great piece here Doris and tut tut tut,(where haven't you been all these times) missed hearing from you!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 7:46 AM
thankxx for your concern Doris.. nice to hear all is well on your end .. we are all doing fantastic.. Ron was sick with bronchitis all last week and my youngest son and his wife are on leave from military till Sunday.. then ..he may get orders to ship out to Libya and she is expecting on Thanksgiving Day... but we thank God for all our blessings .. if he has to go ..he will go as he luvs serving his country and me .. I worry and pray ..like all Moms..
Foulk Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 8:54 AM
enjoyed this piece of wonderful poetry
Babcock Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Moonlight does a crazy things for a thing called love. Great write. love phyl
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 10:36 AM
The best to you in Francine's contest with this excellent poem. Thank you Doris for your kind comments. How is your mother doing after her surgery today? Love, Carol
Hannen Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 10:19 AM
A really touching poem. I especially love final line-so so true.
Horne Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 7:55 AM
How romantic, Doris - love it : ) Jack
Horsman Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 9:19 PM
love this Doris, missed you on soup. Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 5:26 PM
Moonlight does crazy things to lovers Doris.. sweet and romantic .. yes a gaze says so very much luv.. hope u are well and happy.. hope all goes well with Mom tomorrow luv..
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