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Swoon By the Light of the Moon

Moonlight and bright eyes caress Hands sizzle when they touch A gaze says so much not less Sweet words and lies are icing as such Heartstrings sing on a right hunch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2011 6:26:00 AM
Romantic sizzle - lover where it takes you. Thank you Doris for visiting and all your kind words.
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/28/2011 2:39:00 PM
you are welcome, do you have a book published? you really are talented.
Date: 5/19/2011 11:42:00 AM
Great piece here Doris and tut tut tut,(where haven't you been all these times) missed hearing from you!
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:46:00 AM
thankxx for your concern Doris.. nice to hear all is well on your end .. we are all doing fantastic.. Ron was sick with bronchitis all last week and my youngest son and his wife are on leave from military till Sunday.. then ..he may get orders to ship out to Libya and she is expecting on Thanksgiving Day... but we thank God for all our blessings .. if he has to go ..he will go as he luvs serving his country and me .. I worry and pray ..like all Moms..
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Date: 3/30/2011 8:54:00 AM
enjoyed this piece of wonderful poetry
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Date: 3/24/2011 7:57:00 AM
Moonlight does a crazy things for a thing called love. Great write. love phyl
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Date: 3/16/2011 10:36:00 AM
The best to you in Francine's contest with this excellent poem. Thank you Doris for your kind comments. How is your mother doing after her surgery today? Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2011 10:19:00 AM
A really touching poem. I especially love final line-so so true.
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:55:00 AM
How romantic, Doris - love it : ) Jack
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Date: 3/15/2011 9:19:00 PM
love this Doris, missed you on soup. Harry
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:26:00 PM
Moonlight does crazy things to lovers Doris.. sweet and romantic .. yes a gaze says so very much luv.. hope u are well and happy.. hope all goes well with Mom tomorrow luv..
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