Swollen Buds

. Swollen buds Star Magnolia, Dogwoods Hope of renewal (Non-traditional Haiku)

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/5/2011 1:49:00 PM

Ah, yes, the buds are already forming. Same goes for the azaleas, Sara. Spring's gifts to nature always fill us with "hope of renewal." Love your haiku! Love, Carolyn

Diane Christian

Date: 2/4/2011 3:55:00 AM

ww wow so nice, howw e all look to spring and all hope for renewal ate aster tide,a beautiful poem for easter, keep blosoming my dear friend kep shining God bless from diane

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/3/2011 7:47:00 PM

Yes every word of truth here, love this beautiful Haiku. Harry

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/3/2011 7:46:00 PM

Very deep and beautiful.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/3/2011 4:47:00 PM

Cute and meaningful haiku with great images, Sara

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/3/2011 2:11:00 PM

smile -- and where one thus finds flowers amid their bloom my dear, i do believe that they shall also behold, the warming suns rays caressing their sweetened cheeks and kissing their precious hearts within, the brightened hopes and joys of but another, springtimes moments within the lovely dreams of, something beautiful -- very wonderful painting amid the fragrant hues, my dear -- love, christopher ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2011 1:29:00 PM

Hoping they renew quickly to show signs of Spring forthcoming Sara my friend.. lovely Haiku with tantalizing lines luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2011 1:03:00 PM

Neat-o, going into the non-tradional ones, Sara! when I looked up flower names for my flower poem I saw how many flowers represent expressions such as love or hope. So that must be Dogwood's meaning? Luv, Andrea

Kib G

Date: 2/3/2011 12:43:00 PM

interesting