Swirly Twirly

Swirly twirly,
Floating around,
Can't hear a single sound.
Swirly twirly,
Dancing along,
Listening to a tribal song.
Swirly twirly,
Bouncing away,
I will come back another day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 4, 2009 at 6:13 AM
Good Morning Tracey. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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August 3, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Nicely written. It has rhyme and rhythm. Sara
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