Swirling Vortex

Destruction in wake
Natural Phenomenon
Tornado magic 

Nathan Bane Leccese
©All Rights Reserved 05/26/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 29, 2009 at 5:29 PM
Wish my insurance company would read this! The devastation caused by the tornado is compounded when an insurer tries to underestimate the damage to save some of the "policyholder's" money. This one got me thinking, Nate. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn
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May 28, 2009 at 10:30 PM
A tornado hit my home town a few weeks ago, the destruction is still abroad. Nice work...Raul
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May 27, 2009 at 2:50 PM
EXCELLENT HAIKU VERY DESCRIPTIVE AND FULL OF IMAGERY GREAT WRITE
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May 27, 2009 at 11:28 AM
Tornado magic...Nathan, what a oxymoron...good haiku brother.
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