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Swirling the Soapsuds

Down where the oregano is blossoming bright The roses have grown quiet in their delight Daylilies are shooting up spikes with buds I truly long for sweet love, as I swirl the soapsuds

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Date: 6/16/2023 8:27:00 AM
I think you romanticize at the kitchen window! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/16/2023 11:42:00 AM
Somewhat, Kim. Got to get some romance somewhere. LOL..Thanks for the added thoughts to my page. Sara
Date: 6/15/2023 1:40:00 AM
I really like this poem Sara and can visualize her. Loved the imagery.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/15/2023 3:58:00 AM
Nancy, thank you for your uplifting review of my work. Your visits are always appreciated. Sara
Date: 6/13/2023 7:34:00 AM
The guy across the road is swirling soapsuds too. Got this feeling.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/13/2023 8:30:00 AM
Okay, so the guy across the road is swirling soapsuds, Paul. Don't know if I need to laugh or not. Sara
Date: 6/12/2023 3:49:00 AM
Splendid poem. Love will be ever yours.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/12/2023 4:22:00 AM
Why, thank you Victor. I appreciate that. Sara
Date: 6/11/2023 10:33:00 AM
So pleasant to be in your blossoming garden--as you so wonderfully convey in these images.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/11/2023 4:32:00 PM
Vijay, Yes, I enjoy the garden even though some days it is mostly seen through the kitchen window. We need rain and I hope we do get some. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 6/11/2023 9:39:00 AM
Your poetry consistently captivates me. This piece is no exception, as you have masterfully crafted it. I truly long for sweet love, as I swirl the soapsuds. Well done Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/11/2023 4:31:00 PM
Why thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

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