Swirling the Soapsuds

 Down where the oregano is blossoming bright
The roses have grown quiet in their delight
Daylilies are shooting up spikes with buds
I truly long for sweet love, as I swirl the soapsuds   
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 8:27 AM
I think you romanticize at the kitchen window! :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Somewhat, Kim. Got to get some romance somewhere. LOL..Thanks for the added thoughts to my page. Sara
Kaufman Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 1:40 AM
I really like this poem Sara and can visualize her. Loved the imagery.
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 3:58 AM
Nancy, thank you for your uplifting review of my work. Your visits are always appreciated. Sara
Bell Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 7:34 AM
The guy across the road is swirling soapsuds too. Got this feeling.
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 8:30 AM
Okay, so the guy across the road is swirling soapsuds, Paul. Don't know if I need to laugh or not. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 3:49 AM
Splendid poem. Love will be ever yours.
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 4:22 AM
Why, thank you Victor. I appreciate that. Sara
Pandit Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 10:33 AM
So pleasant to be in your blossoming garden--as you so wonderfully convey in these images.
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 4:32 PM
Vijay, Yes, I enjoy the garden even though some days it is mostly seen through the kitchen window. We need rain and I hope we do get some. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Poet Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Your poetry consistently captivates me. This piece is no exception, as you have masterfully crafted it. I truly long for sweet love, as I swirl the soapsuds. Well done Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 4:31 PM
Why thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
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