Swirling Space

blues yellows and white
black space swirls contrasting light…
trees painting the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 9:56 AM
enjoyed reading this, so colorful. thank you for reading the pond and for your comment.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Lovely words Robb and a forebearer of Spring for sure.. luv the trees painting the night lines.. still waiting for Spring to show up here in N.J. luv.. happy weekend ...
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 12:22 AM
Cool haiku. All you needed was read added in there to have all four colors of the personality "color code" that I enjoy so much! Off for three days, so I'll just say bye bye!!
Mehta Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 1:57 PM
really a fantastic images to sketch a picture of a swirling space of a night, Robb
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