Swirling Mist

Time stood still
I reached for you
But in a dream
You can get confused
Swirling mist
Somethings not right
It isn't you I reached for	
In the night
Sadness wakes me 
Up from this
The dream so real
is now an abyss
I try to see
More clearly now
Deep in your eyes
I'm lost somehow
Now I wonder how
I can make you see
What your swirling mist 
Has done to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 6, 2009 at 7:26 PM
nice.
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