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swirling russet leaves ~
scattering of random thoughts
in a restless night

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A Haiku with Movement
Nature Themed Contest
Hosted by Tania Kitchin

© 7th May, 2020

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/15/2020 10:08:00 AM

You've painted a perfect picture, Paul. I have those restless thoughts occasionally :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2020 2:34:00 PM

In my case such nights don't occur too often; I don't get any sleep when they do...though they have their good points...that's how this poem was born! Regards // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/23/2020 3:50:00 AM

You are an wizard with words Panagiota

Paul Callus
Date: 6/5/2020 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota. Funny, but I had already replied to your comment!! Regards // paul

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 5/14/2020 5:44:00 AM

Beautiful. The power of rustling leaves. A mind teaser. Kind wishes, Kai

Paul Callus
Date: 5/14/2020 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, Kai. Have a nice day. // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/11/2020 10:46:00 AM

Wow. Cool thought (and moment) you captured. For me, this is what I like to see in haiku: simple language ... and observations, that makes you see something in a new way. A revelation in familiarity.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/11/2020 3:13:00 PM

Both your reaction and feedback are appreciated, Timothy...thank you. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/10/2020 10:05:00 PM

I love the connection of the leaves and scattered thoughts. This is wonderful Paul! I hope Tania see that! I loved this haiku. xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 5/11/2020 2:52:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. I'm focusing a lot on haiku and tanka lately, and several of them have been accepted for publication. ~ regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/10/2020 2:10:00 PM

Fabulous imagery you captured the theme perfectly, for some reason i am sleeping better during lock down! Hope you and the family are keeping well. love to you all:-) Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 5/10/2020 6:05:00 PM

So pleased you enjoyed it, Jan. This failed to make it to the finals! ~ So far we are getting on fine. Teachers and students have daily sessions online. Regards to all. Hugs // paul

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/10/2020 11:52:00 AM

Love it for its imagery

Paul Callus
Date: 5/10/2020 6:06:00 PM

Thank you, Paghunda. Regards // paul

Silent One

Date: 5/10/2020 11:19:00 AM

A great image in your poem... Fitting for the photo

Paul Callus
Date: 5/10/2020 11:28:00 AM

Thank you S-1. Hope you are keeping well. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/9/2020 7:53:00 AM

This is a great poem Paul. Well done. I hope you have a nice day :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2020 8:41:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi. Hope you have been regaining your strength a bit every day. May you have a lovely weekend. // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/8/2020 5:13:00 AM

Funny, but I wrote a poem and named it LEAVES about 2 weeks ago. I love your Haiku, one style I have never tried, will do one day. Our minds must be a mess Paul, we cram so much into them, wonder how our brains don't just explode like a watermelon! Well penned my friend. Warm regard and hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/8/2020 12:40:00 PM

Thank you, Jenny; your visits always end up being lovely and pleasant. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul