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Written: September 27, 2023
Love Poem Contest                                       Darla Seely  
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A poem full of glee and love,
Poke with a rant, a bee-hued as a dove,
Tied into a pair of rich-soul,
In a song of lust, a warm role.

Hush at ease,
Keen opus, fuel the kees.
Body area mold and weld,
A love lilt will bind us as we meld.

With a soft kiss, lips meet with balm,
In this holy cup, feel the vibe of calm.
Lame, warm up the skin,
The ogle spell and the opia fire win.

Eyes shut soul to soul,
Deep crux, zeal goal.
Grin at will, mind teem with glee,
To show that cheer and love, ne'er flee.

All true, Love's has a firm trek,
For me and you, ever peck.
Wrap me in a cozy hug,
The vast boon of love and tug.

So let us glow each day,
In this love poem, the soul will stay.
Love, an art with lines so tall,
Egos rule over all.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 2:39:00 AM

A romantic poem written in so eloquent a manner. Impeccable rhyme and excellent thoughts.

Paige Hind

Date: 9/28/2023 5:21:00 PM

Beatiful! I don't know how you keep up with all these rhyming poems! Loved it!

Jay Narain

Date: 9/28/2023 9:55:00 AM

Nice four letter or less word poem. Carries deep loving feelings with imgaery.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/28/2023 7:40:00 AM

Your way with pairing words is very unique, and surreal as well as ethereal. I absolutely love the flow and how you’ve written also “ a bee hued as a dove” “ in this holy cup feel the vibe of calm” i love that! So creatively crafted, flowing seamlessly, in such brilliant rhymes too! Exquisite imagery and depth of emotions in this is so very captivating and beautiful to read out loud!soul warming writ this is as always dear Sotto, i hope and wish you a poetically blessed day. Keep inking always

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/28/2023 6:36:00 AM

Awesome how you did this my friend. Not easy to write the entire poem with four letter words. A FAVE from me for this poem full of glee and love.

Silent One

Date: 9/28/2023 4:39:00 AM

A lovely poem for the contest, you have a wonderful way with words.. A poet who writes romance so easily.. Each line there is love, those soft kisses and pecks create vivid imagery in your poem.. have to be careful of that ego though, some cant handle it sadly..