JC Brul Poet Haiku

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice P Poetry Contest 28 May 2025

swing hiku

 ~ ~   ~     ~      ~  
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   /     {         }                             
 /        {         }              swing  a           s  into sky
           {_____}                              r     c
            {_____}       bare feet chase late passing clouds~
                                      dainty dreams take flight

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Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2025 at 12:46 PM super cute. Big congrats

Ink Empress May 28, 2025 at 11:13 PM Back with Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light! #teamhiku! Yeay!

Ink Empress May 28, 2025 at 8:07 AM Ah this is so beautiful! I love the artistic nature of your hiku! Ah you did an exquisite job dear poetic soul! Im sure will place high! Best wishes always! Sending you light -a~

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2025 at 8:18 PM - Lovely ... brings back memories from a long time ago, Jcb :) - hugs JC Brul May 27, 2025 at 8:22 PM thank u Anne-Lise.