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For Brian Strand's Your Choice P Poetry Contest 28 May 2025

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ----------------- / { } / { } swing a s into sky {_____} r c {_____} bare feet chase late passing clouds~ dainty dreams take flight

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Date: 5/29/2025 12:46:00 PM
super cute. Big congrats
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Date: 5/28/2025 11:13:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light! #teamhiku! Yeay!
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Date: 5/28/2025 8:07:00 AM
Ah this is so beautiful! I love the artistic nature of your hiku! Ah you did an exquisite job dear poetic soul! Im sure will place high! Best wishes always! Sending you light -a~
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Date: 5/27/2025 11:31:00 PM
Super sweet! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/27/2025 8:18:00 PM
- Lovely ... brings back memories from a long time ago, Jcb :) - hugs
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Date: 5/27/2025 8:22:00 PM
thank u Anne-Lise.

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