Notes About The Poem

Swimming Upstream

a sockeye salmon

leaps into the jaws of death ~ 

   bear yawning upstream



A Haiku with Movement - Nature themed Poetry Contest (Winner: 10th Place)
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Date written: 05/07/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 2:31 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Thank you very much, Eve:-) Happy Mother's Day!
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 9:52 PM
cool and creative Ku, my friend.Congrats on the win.
Ibeh Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-) Stay safe and blessed, my friend!
Kauffman Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Very creative haiku, Edward - really unique. Congratulations on your win.
Ibeh Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 3:33 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Sam:-) Stay safe and blessed, my friend!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 9:36 AM
You never know how your day we’ll go...whether you’ll get a meal or be the meal :o Congratulations, my friend!
Ibeh Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 10:40 AM
Haha, so true, Kim:-) Thanks for dropping by, friend!
Kitchin Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 6:04 AM
Ed, congratulations on your winning placement a fun and creative haiku!
Ibeh Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Tania:-) Most obliged.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 4:44 PM
Oh I love it Edward! My best to you, xomo
Ibeh Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Thank you, Maureen:-) I'm glad you did! Have a blessed day, friend!
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