Swimming Pool

Black lucid sky-

Sun and moon’s swimming pool

Stars are guards.







©Kiran Bantawa
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 5:33 AM
Fine metaphors and similies to create a romantic picture, Kiran
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October 23, 2013 at 4:39 PM
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October 10, 2013 at 11:04 PM
thanks Dr. Ram
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September 30, 2013 at 4:45 AM
- Kiran, well written haiku! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 10, 2013 at 11:04 PM
thank you anne.
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September 30, 2013 at 5:18 AM
thanks anne!
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