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Swimming Pool

Black lucid sky- Sun and moon’s swimming pool Stars are guards. ©Kiran Bantawa

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/30/2013 5:33:00 AM
Fine metaphors and similies to create a romantic picture, Kiran
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/23/2013 4:39:00 PM
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/10/2013 11:04:00 PM
thanks Dr. Ram
Date: 9/30/2013 4:45:00 AM
- Kiran, well written haiku! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/10/2013 11:04:00 PM
thank you anne.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 9/30/2013 5:18:00 AM
thanks anne!