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Swimming

The sight of the blue water Shook me with great fear. A small pool turned into an ocean And I cried loudly in tension.? The sight of the blue water Was one I had to savor. Fear and tension receded While bravery and determination succeeded The sight of blue water Finally became much sweeter.

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Date: 10/26/2023 8:25:00 PM
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