Swim Suits & Suntans

as the sun beats down
beaches start beaming with life
hot beautiful days
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Neshat Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 3:46 AM
nicely put togather.
Chircop Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 2:03 PM
recomment-thanks friend,you re too kind to me,and regarding you write here,the sun is beating down in my country so warm and loving andthis just got me in a good mood-i love the sun---and the beach-----charma
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April 25, 2009 at 9:15 AM
This one has be smiling. Love those beach days. Sounds like someone dropped a wonderful gift on your porch. Now, you just have to fill them with plants. Nice surprises sure brighten one's day. Thank you for you comments. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessings to you. Karen
Shango Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 8:13 AM
Check out Negril, Jamaica, now ... O to be there in Montego Bay now, and hear calypso whoring for tourist dollars on the quay, and smell the white rum from far away ... you invoke a lot of memories, brother.
Strand Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 12:05 AM
Love that alliteration in your title.We have a had some of your Californian sun this week.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Townsend Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 10:46 PM
Oh yes, I can hardly stand the wait. The best part for me is watching my children as their faces light up with pleasure. Great writing... it is amazing how many pictures flow from so few words. Smiles from Lolita
Ehigiator Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 5:41 PM
Beautiful images here, I can see it so clearly, everyone taking off into the water, waves rusnhing in and out, kids building castles in the sand...A Sweet summer treat is taking a trip to the beach..Nice one Michael!! Always, Tyesha
Higgins Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 4:33 PM
wonderfully done my friend..I can feel the breeze kissing my face.
Winter Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 4:18 PM
That song with the lines "Hot fun in the summertime..." popped right into my head! You captured summer! Love it! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 2:44 PM
I can feel the sand between my toes!!! Get out the sun-block! Hooray!
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