Swim Or Sink

Forced to bite the dust,
to us seems unjust
but think,
if we readjust
and flow of life trust,
we link
with God’s grace robust
feeling an upthrust:
bliss wink!

Desire is our chink,
so let’s doublethink
belief
before our next blink,
discarding that mink;
new leaf 
we turn, love’s hue pink,
die’s cast, swim or sink,
oh chief!

Ego is joy’s thief,
so to get relief,
shed lust.
Marooned at fear’s reef,
that’s now our motif,
soul’s bust. 
Oh worthy Khalif,
let us now be brief:
be just.

24-March-2023
Virelai
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Way to go with this form. I still need to get going on this one.
Seeker Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:00 PM
Yes, it’s a difficult form (for me at least). Needs a bit of practice
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