Swift Touch of Fate

I stand freezing in a warm night
As if snowflakes fall inside my mind.
They say, when you find your true love in  life
Cold air would surround you and make you high.

The night cradled my shifting mind
And made all the love I feel can never hide.
Everything was filled up
And the only thing that's missing are wings that could make us fly.

For a moment the whole world stopped 
Just to make a way for the two of us to talk and laugh.
It brought us together but just for a moment I guess...
Nothing more and nothing less..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 21, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Tricia, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Gasun Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 8:43 AM
wow... very inspiring!
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 11:48 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Tricia. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
Hu Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 2:32 AM
beautiful moments
Palmer Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 10:11 PM
time passes quickly,especially when you are having a good time,nice write Tricia
St.Cross Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:49 PM
‡ Definitely Earmarked For A Continuation This Love In A Glimpse, My Sweet Beautiful Girl * Please, If Possible Stop Myself Know If Its Ever So ? So, I View Its Further Thoughts; This Priceless Heart * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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July 11, 2012 at 8:31 PM
hey thnx..i will..=)
Cornwall Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:32 PM
Wonderful poem....patrick
Aizpuru Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:44 PM
hey thnx for appreciating..=)
Farina Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 6:55 PM
Interesting take on falling in love
Aizpuru Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:45 PM
yeah..=) thnx..
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