Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Haiku

Swells That Compel

SWELLS THAT COMPEL

the fall moon's lull shows
mystique silence across skies
branches shadow dance

rice seedling patch strewn
upon well-plough watered fields--
globular tummies

from my bikini 
to quilted silk evening wraps --
chrysanthemum blooms

rainbow processions
passing through cities thru-fare --
church bells count the mass

(c)Olive Eloisa
6:50am
August 18, 2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 17, 2014 at 4:03 AM globular tummies are great. Olive Eloisa in full bloom. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 17, 2014 at 10:25 AM thanks much .. :) I appreciate it.. :D

Paul Callus August 20, 2014 at 8:12 AM I am enlightened Olive_eloi! Love all the set, but the first one caught my attention first! [still catching up on mail backlog!] Take care & hugs. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 5:05 AM Catch up catch up Paul..:) lol thanks much anyway..:) wc back..:)

Debbie Guzzi August 19, 2014 at 1:32 PM 3 still makes no sense? L & L Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 19, 2014 at 11:19 PM hahha .. :D i deleted.. really can;t find the right words for the one i meant to have . :D

Debbie Guzzi August 19, 2014 at 8:46 AM Ut oh fix line lay out dear. Send again the one that had the medals to my soup mail Light & Love

Robert Lindley August 19, 2014 at 8:18 AM Words that glow my friend!!! BBBravoooooo!!!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 19, 2014 at 10:36 AM ThAnks for the remark Robert..:)

Debbie Guzzi August 18, 2014 at 8:46 AM wonderful images Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 19, 2014 at 10:35 AM Debbie thank you so much..:) really appreciate it.. Thanks for reminding me how haiku's are done.. ..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 18, 2014 at 4:21 AM Love ur haikus Olive! Fourth one my fav! Best wishes dear! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 18, 2014 at 9:58 AM Dr.. :D thanks much.. :) im sorry can;t reply soonest time.. :D