Swells That Compel

SWELLS THAT COMPEL

the fall moon's lull shows
mystique silence across skies
branches shadow dance

rice seedling patch strewn
upon well-plough watered fields--
globular tummies

from my bikini 
to quilted silk evening wraps --
chrysanthemum blooms

rainbow processions
passing through cities thru-fare --
church bells count the mass

(c)Olive Eloisa
6:50am
August 18, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/17/2014 4:03:00 AM
globular tummies are great. Olive Eloisa in full bloom.
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:25:00 AM
thanks much .. :) I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 8/20/2014 8:12:00 AM
I am enlightened Olive_eloi! Love all the set, but the first one caught my attention first! [still catching up on mail backlog!] Take care & hugs. // paul
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Date: 8/22/2014 5:05:00 AM
Catch up catch up Paul..:) lol thanks much anyway..:) wc back..:)
Date: 8/19/2014 1:32:00 PM
3 still makes no sense? L & L
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:19:00 PM
hahha .. :D i deleted.. really can;t find the right words for the one i meant to have . :D
Date: 8/19/2014 8:46:00 AM
Ut oh fix line lay out dear. Send again the one that had the medals to my soup mail Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2014 8:18:00 AM
Words that glow my friend!!! BBBravoooooo!!!!!!
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Date: 8/19/2014 10:36:00 AM
ThAnks for the remark Robert..:)
Date: 8/18/2014 8:46:00 AM
wonderful images Light & Love
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 10:35:00 AM
Debbie thank you so much..:) really appreciate it.. Thanks for reminding me how haiku's are done.. ..:)
Date: 8/18/2014 4:21:00 AM
Love ur haikus Olive! Fourth one my fav! Best wishes dear!
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Date: 8/18/2014 9:58:00 AM
Dr.. :D thanks much.. :) im sorry can;t reply soonest time.. :D
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